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  1. Dr. Loggins at |

    Great job getting interviews and a lot of sources, David! If you can take some time to reorganize it and reword it a little, it can be a strong story.

    As I mentioned in class, look at the interviews you got and consider common themes. Then, organize the article around the themes instead of around individual interviews.

    At the same time, take a look at the sections where you refer to yourself and what the story is about. Take yourself out of the story and tell this fully in the third person. Also, allow the story to just be about Halloween without telling the readers that specifically.

    The News Manual’s discussion of basic introductions should help you with this: http://www.thenewsmanual.net/Manuals%20Volume%201/volume1_04.htm

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