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  1. Russell Heitmann at |

    Hey Nevin,

    This is a really solid piece. Just a few things that needed to be cleaned up. You still need to work on the source set ups, you don’t need to say “Smith said in an interview, “quote quote quote. Just drop the intro and go right into the quote in many cases.

    I also need to know who specifically said the quote in the fourth paragraph. Two people can’t say something, so if you could email me who said that, I can get the story posted with a few minor edits.

    Good work!

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