Here is the link for my peer review of Jordan’s knowledge paper. The sources looked good, I highlighted a couple minor edits, everything seemed to come out alright with only a handful of opinions used throughout the report. More comments at the end of the report in the link provided.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1aqH7QNwRHjda0_sZOx1Y8VgPLU2TiROi/view?usp=sharing