My differentiation between opinion and fact, as well as all comments and evaluation of the content of the article, are in Google Doc below.
This is the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lDWdhe9jW0XvIC6uWgElWoNrgbDhUr03zJZ_brQHN0E/edit?usp=sharing
I would like to say the following three things about Shayna’s knowledge paper.
- In terms of the length of the paper, it’s a little short, and there are no quiz questions.
- In terms of the content of the paper, the paper is entitled “The Beef Industry: Fighting The Pandemic”, but it does not show anything about Fighting in The Beef Industry. Maybe my understanding is wrong, please forgive me if I misunderstand, but in my understanding, the knowledge paper may still need an introduction or a paragraph that can lead to the theme, and the end of the paper may also need a conclusion or a summary. Having only four subheadings can be confusing to the reader, they may not know how to relate to the article, to the title.
- In terms of citations of the paper, the indirect citations in this article are great, but sometimes the generalizations are so succinct that I can’t tell whether it’s the author’s opinion or yours. In addition, my advice for reference is, hopefully, you can go to a library database or somewhere else and find some more formal quotes from books or newspapers. All of your citations in this paper are from websites, which are monotonous and may not be authoritative.